Here is my draft cut for my Directions unit - Scene 1 of Episode 1 of Orphan Black Season 1.
I have basically put everything in the correct order and some minor editing to make it feel right. After some feedback from peers, Simon and Mike Rymer I have made a list of things I'll need to get fine before the fine cut deadline next monday.
- Sort out the train hitting Beth, Currently no realism and doesn't make much sense
- Make the shots of beth crying feel more like we are walking towards her, static shots did not look good.
- I need more shots of the train coming into and out of the station and possible going along the track (Planning to film Thursday or Friday)
-Sound needs a lot more detail, I had not really done much sound editing in this cut but it has always been on my mind, eerie music for the scene searching through her handbag
- Add a Buzz Track (Recorded already)
- Audio of running down steps
- Basic color correction
- Overlapping audio on cafe scene
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