Wednesday, 17 May 2017

Documentary Unit - Fine Cut

Today was Fine Cut Deadline - This is the cut after Zoe's feedback so we have update some of the things she mentioned.

Some of the big things that Zoe suggested were:

- Less diet pill stuff in the intro
- Interweave the photoshoot with the montage, as Carley's interview by itself is not that interesting.
- The in/outs of each segment need to more seamless.
- Make pole fitness about being body confident and not losing weight.
- Cut down Jayne's interview and try to rearrange it to make sense/ more sense.
- Make the intro better, doesn't work in the car.

Here is the fine cut with a few late additions.


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